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I think it should be a priority to look good. First, it shows that you care about yourself, but there are some people who just can't afford nice clothes but that doesn't mean they can't make them selves look appropriate. In the sory "Same Song " the kids were not trying to look good for themselves but for other people. For example when the girl put on jeans that didn't fit she wasn't doing it for her self but for other people ,so she good look skinny. Overall I think that people should look good for themselves instead of looking good for other people.