Monday, November 1, 2010

A day in fall

One day on Semptember 22 Me and my family went to celebrate my god brother's birthday.When we got there we said hi to everybody and started eating food.After we ate my brothers and I got in the pool that they had in there backyard.Later that day a storm came and striked right in the back yard and my brother's and I ran inside. It was one of the most frightening experiences I've had in fall.

1 comment:

  1. This should be in third-person narration. Redo it before Raquel grades it, please.

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