Monday, February 7, 2011
Paragraph to Persuade You to Read My Poem
I think students should miss rosie because it is a sad but true story about a women who uses idioms to describe her apperance. She used to be the most beautiful gal in Georgia until she got old. What thought she was trying to say is, should people care how they look knowing in the future you will rot and become unattractive? I also think that she was saying yes because you can look back and say that you were that person.
Imagery in a Song
A song thats represents my life using imagery is" A House Is Not A Home" by Luther Vandross. It is explain how empty I feel when I'm lonely. It makes me feel like there is someone who understands what I goin threw. I first started listening to it when my mom layed in the car one morning. She said it was one of her favorites too. I recomend everyone to listen to this song it will change how you see things. If you want listen to the song click the URL below.
http://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/luthervandross/ahouseisnotahome.html
http://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/luthervandross/ahouseisnotahome.html
Friday, February 4, 2011
Thursday, February 3, 2011
A Storm in the Mountains” One with Nature
When I was in Long Beach I had a argument with my uncle and ran away. I didn't kow were I was going but I really didn't care at the time. I wandered for hours crying and trying to get the frusturation out of my system. I started getting tired and hungry so I went to a park. It was at least 10:00. I crawled up against a tree to try to sleep. I looked up at the sky and the stars looke so beautiful. As I gazed at the stars I felt whole, I felt one with nature because it calmed me down and made me forget about my problems. I then left and walked around still looking at the stars. Until I walked into a street light. Then I slept under that street light for the rest of the night peacefuly.
Wednesday, February 2, 2011
Imagery in a Selected Poem Paragraph
In the story "The Haunted Palace" by Edugar Allan Poe I visualized a giant castle with ghost and trapped doors. Also imagined Scooby-Doo and the gang there solving a mystery. I also imagined lightening and wolfs houling to the moon.
Friday, January 28, 2011
Dream House Paragraph with Imagery
If I could describe my dream house it would look like a mansion with a village surrounding it. The main building(mansion)would have all my brothers and sisters, also it would have a big room just for my parents. The outside of my house would be black with pictures of all my favorite black people on it. The inside would be different colors all the time. Most likely I will change it when the season changes.I would have over 20 rooms and 21 bathrooms. I will have 4 kitchens and 5 game rooms.Now my outside villages would have the rest of my family in them and each house would be three stories. I would let them customize the4 house any way they please.My back yard would be 100 acres and all the house 10. Finally I would have the biggest building in the middle of all the town and it would be the the dinner room table for special occasions, like when family gets together and has a big feast.
Third Quarter Goals Reflection
Earlier this quarter I made my goals to be a A-B student. So far I'm doing good. I have a B in most of my classes. As of now I have one C that I'm working on. I have been turning in all my work and doing good on all of my test. My teachers have been complimenting me on my success. Last year I had four F's and two D's because of me not trying. This year when I brought them up teachers were amazed of how I brought them up so easy. I told them that I was tired of being another statistic and I wanted to make a change. So this year I'm going to do my best to get a 4.0 and become a successful young African American.
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