Paragraph to Persuade You to Read My Poem

I think students should miss rosie because it is a sad but true story about a women who uses idioms to describe her apperance. She used to be the most beautiful gal in Georgia until she got old. What thought she was trying to say is, should people care how they look knowing in the future you will rot and become unattractive? I also think that she was saying yes because you can look back and say that you were that person.