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Enlist Paragraph

I would enlist into the military. I want to go to the Marines because my granddad and my father were in the Marines. I was always interested in Marines because my dad always said they were the best. I want to my family proud and also traveling is fun. So I am going to get enlisted and become a Marine and I will go around making the world safer one bullet at a time. The after twenty years of making peace I will retire and relax in my house in Liberia.

Primary and Secondary Sources Comparison

The difference between Primary and Secondary source is that Primary source is told from a person who was in or witness the event. Secondary sources is sometimes good but in my opinion is useless. I say this because it is told by someone who heard about the event or read about it in a newspaper. It might not always be true is what I'm stressing. If the story was not told by the people who were in it or watching it, it should not be talked about. So the difference between the two is that Primary is more reliable then Secondary.

The Legend News Story

Sophomore Paragraph

From my perspective it doesn't mean anything to be a sophmore. It doesn't make a person better and doesn't make any body worse. really it is a name for a person who passed everything lower than that grade. School is almost like a ladder. You have to climb up one step at a time, but you can stepdown or stay at the same place if your not climbing properly.

Similes + Metaphors + Personification = Figurative Language

Metaphor
1.Love is a candy.
2.Hate is terrorist bombing the Statue of Liberty.
3.Life is play-doh.
4.Friendship is the universe.
Simile
1.Community meetings are like watching paint dry.
2.Passes are like going massages.
3.The gym is like a sauna
4.My house is like a arcade.
Personification
1.Moon had a bright smile on Saturday.
2.The flower danced as the wind blew.
3.My phone cried for me to answer it.
4.My car was spitting as I was pulling onto the side of the freeway.

SPA Poem

Life on campus is like a hell. It sucks, there is always something bad going on and someone is always getting hurt. It makes me smile. I like when people suffer, its like a reality show. I love it when someone say something behind some one back and when people fight. My favorite is when people falsely accuse other students. It make my world some much better.