Thursday, November 4, 2010

The story and song similarities

The Bass,the River,and Sheila Mant is simalr to the song I'm going to miss her because they both choose a fish over a girl. Also they both realize that what you love sticks with you forever and people don't. Also another similar trait is that both girls disliked fishing. Although they could of had both if they just talk to them,maybe the woman would'nt care if they were fishing.

Wednesday, November 3, 2010

Internal and External conflicts

In the story the narrator faces both external and internal conflicts. In the story he is in a canoe with the girl that she likes and has a fishing rod that has a bass on the end of it. The girl that he happens to like thinks fishing is boring, so he tries to be cool and not tell her that he is fishing at that moment. The bass was very large and pulling the canoe and in order to keep her from knowing that he is fishing he cuts the line. His internal conflict is if he should keep the biggest bass he has ever seen or keep the girl that he loves. After awhile he finally makes the decision to cut the line and keep the girl he loves. As a result of these conflicts the narrator changes by decided to not sacrifice what he loves for another person.

Tuesday, November 2, 2010

Falling in Love Paraghraph

Does falling in love change a person. In my opinion, yes. I think if a person is truly in love he/she will behave differently. For example, if a guy is in love usually he tries to show of his muscles or buy flowers and chocolate. If it is a woman who falls in love, she tries to more revealing clothes or drops something to see if the person she loves pick it up. There are times where people will change only to find out that they should be themselves, but the only way to discover that is to change.

Monday, November 1, 2010

A day in fall

One day on Semptember 22 Me and my family went to celebrate my god brother's birthday.When we got there we said hi to everybody and started eating food.After we ate my brothers and I got in the pool that they had in there backyard.Later that day a storm came and striked right in the back yard and my brother's and I ran inside. It was one of the most frightening experiences I've had in fall.

Tuesday, October 26, 2010

"Typhoid Fever" Present Tense Childhood Memory

I am seven years old and my name is Kyrhee. I went to school today and was having a bad time. The lunch line was too long,then I was playing on the play ground and got hit with a basketball in front of everyone. They started laughing at me. I know it was not on purpose but it was still not nice. Then I went to class and got in trouble for slapping a girl on the butt. My teacher pinned a note to my shirt with a message to my mommy. When I got home she was sleeping. I ripped it off and threw it away. Later that day the school called and my mommy found out what happened. Then she asked me why did I do it. I told her I didn't know. Then I got a woopen.

Monday, October 25, 2010

"The Cold Equation" fom Marilyns Point of View

I was trying to see my brother on the planet wooden.So heard there was a ship going there so I got on when no one was looking. Some how the captain found me and I though that all I had to do was pay the fine.Then he asked me why am I here and I told him that this was the only ship headed to Woden. Then he asked why do want to go see my brother. Then I found out the consequence was getting ejected.I was devestated and I wanted to at least talk to my brother before I died. Then he said th