Wednesday, September 8, 2010

The Mouse In The Cafe

Once upon a time there was a mouse
who lived in a S.P.A house
he was a friendly little guy
who was bright with his head held high
he had a wonderful life
he had two kids and a beautiful wife
he ate the freshes of garbage cheese
but there was a problem with his son luis
luis loved ripe food
but his older brother micheal said be grateful little dude
luis smiled
but for a liitle while
he went one day
to go to the cafe
to get the some delicous gourmet
afrter ate he realized one mistake
he is on two hour and it is past eight

Tuesday, September 7, 2010

I think that the crazy hospital during 2052 were more civilized.

Thursday, September 2, 2010

The Pedistrian Paragraph

The story is about to not lose your old way of life.For example if we forgot how to walk we would be almost useless.The author was showing how Leonard did something we were born to do and was penalized for it.It was a example of what might happen if we keeping relying on technology.Also I think he's saying that some things are better done old fashion.i think he's right because technology can fail easier than a person can.Most people depend on their computer to do everything.Items don't have something that humans do,which is common sense and emotions.

Wednesday, September 1, 2010

2053

Well if I would have a life in 2053 it would start like this. I would wake up to my grand children laughing. I would have a chair that sits next to my bed that hovers. I would get on it and head to the bathroom. After I'm done using the bathroom I would brush my teeth and go to my closet that puts my clothes on for me. When I get dress I would head down stairs and see what my grand kids were doing. Then they would say playing the animals. I had all sorts of animals in my house and I had a zoo in my backyard. My grand kids loved playing with all of them. They were all trained so I wouldn't have to worry about them getting hurt. I was the richest man in the world and all I did was share my money. My entire family lived in my house. My hose was forty three stories. I told my grand kids that we had to go eat. We got into the elevator and went down to the mess hall. When we got there we had a robot servant take our orders. I always had sunny side up eggs, bacon and pancakes. After we eat we go swimming in the giant ocean like pool to play with the dolphins. I didn't want to get wet so my chair turned into a mini submarine. After playing with my dolphins I went to all my family members and told them good morning and had five minute chat with them about all sorts of topics. For example me and my brother were talking about Madden 53.Then when I was done I went back to sleep for the rest of the day.

Poem Paragraph

I do not know how it relates it is really confusing to me

Wednesday, August 25, 2010

Contents of the Dead Man's Pocket plot change paragraph

In the story Dead Man's Pocket a man named Tom Beneke loses a yellow paper and decides to make a decision to go get it.If I could change the plot I would make him not go after it.I say this because you could just make another paper.If you made another one you could of still got a raise but instead he risk his life trying to get it.To me that is not smart.I understand if he had a project that like took a week or sobut a paper he could of pulled a all nighter had it turned in thew next morning.This is what would choose if I could change the plot.

Tuesday, August 24, 2010

Decision

If I had a science project that was due tomorrow and my friend asked me to hangout I would ask him to help me.I would ask him to help me because to heads are better than one.If would help I would get done faster and than I could hangout with him.If he said no I would tell him that I would hangout with him later.Then I would get done with my work and when I'm done I would call my friend and ask him to hangout.