Friday, February 11, 2011
Memorable Valentine
I don't have a memorable Valentines Day because know really loved me and I didn't love most people. Most of my life I was put down and hated so I really didn't have anyone except my brothers but all of us were separated. I tried to love people but when I put my heart out it gets broken and ripped to shreds. Lately I have been trying to put my heart out to a girl I met a couple of weeks ago. She smart,beautiful, and really funny and plan to make this Valentines Day special. I hope this will be most memorable Valentines Day.
Thursday, February 10, 2011
My Lyric Poem.
I hate it when people hurt me
I hate it when people can’t see that they are bugging me
I hate it when people stare at me
I hate it when people call me this and that
I hate when people hate me cause I’m black
I hate when my family is struggling
I hate when my brothers are starving
I hate it when people lie
I hate it when people cry
I hate
I hate
I hate everyone
Including me.
I hate it when people can’t see that they are bugging me
I hate it when people stare at me
I hate it when people call me this and that
I hate when people hate me cause I’m black
I hate when my family is struggling
I hate when my brothers are starving
I hate it when people lie
I hate it when people cry
I hate
I hate
I hate everyone
Including me.
"I am Offering This Poem" by Jimmy Santiago Baca / Classwork
In the poem "I am Offering This Poem" it expresses love. In the poem the author tells how e iks like a scarf keeping you warm or like a pair of thick thick socks keeping the freezing air from making your feet cold. Also after stanza he would say "I love you." Thats why the emotion of this story is love.
Wednesday, February 9, 2011
"Same Song" Paragraph
I think it should be a priority to look good. First, it shows that you care about yourself, but there are some people who just can't afford nice clothes but that doesn't mean they can't make them selves look appropriate. In the sory "Same Song " the kids were not trying to look good for themselves but for other people. For example when the girl put on jeans that didn't fit she wasn't doing it for her self but for other people ,so she good look skinny. Overall I think that people should look good for themselves instead of looking good for other people.
Tuesday, February 8, 2011
"Heart! We will forget him!" Paragraph
I think that the narrator treats her heart as a person because when we are hurt we need a person by our side. We use this as a defense mechanism to help us feel loved. Usually we tend to talk to ourself, but in some cases we talk to stuff animals, real animals or imaginary characters. When I get heart broke I talk to myself or two my pets.
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