Tuesday, December 7, 2010
Tuesday, November 30, 2010
Persuasive Project Topic Request
After reviewing the Voxopop discussion, I would like to persuade people to Coach, Foster, or Friends at San Pasqual Academy. You may listen to my class’s discussion here http://www.voxopop.com/group/1fa82b63-3a2b-467a-a46d-efca85728ccc
Monday, November 29, 2010
Persuasive Essay
I beleive that kids on campus should be able to go on social networking sites. One reason is that it is protected. People always say some one can hack in but thats why the site build a priacy account. Also most kids only talk to friends from there school. Also people have no otherway to contact family. Also even if they don't allow us there is always a different site. Myspace or face book are just the same as Gmail or Yahoo. In conclusion I beleive it is better two give us freedom rather then us taking it.
Tuesday, November 23, 2010
"The Bass, the River, and Sheila Mant" and "Catch the Moon" Theme Comparison Essay"
Kivon Lawson Kyrhee Daniels
Period 5 11-22-10
Final Draft
The bass, the River, and Sheila Mant” and “Catch the Moon”
In the story” The Bass, the River, and Sheila Mant” the main character is the narrator. The main conflict in this story is when the Narrator takes Sheila Grant out in a boat and she tells the narrator she hates fishing. Unfortunately he is happy to go fishing and decides to stop what he loves for her.They end up at a concert and she leaves for some guy named Eric Caswell. Later on in his life he remembers to not make that same mistake again. The story’s theme is don’t stop what you love for a person. The main character in the story The Bass, the River, and Sheila Mant is the boy that likes to go fishing and catch bass in the river. The conflict in the story is that the boy falls in love with Sheila Mant and the boy loves to go fishing. Sheila Mant does not like fishing and so the boy throws his fish away that he caught. The resolution is that the boy learned from his mistake. The boy changes because after the fact Sheila Mant does not find him interesting because of his fishing he moves on and still does the same thing in life that he used to do. Whether or not there is something that you like or that you find impressing you don't have to change for that specific thing or that person just be yourself so you have confidence about yourself. The main character for the story “Catch the moon” is Luis and he is a teenage boy. The main conflict in the story is that Luis’s mother dies of cancer and Luis has a big struggle with that even though it has been three years since his mom has passed away. He does not know a lot about how to love or even like a girl because basically the only girl in his life that ever loved him was his mom. The resolution in the story is that Luis still loves his mom but he does not think about her that much and doesn't get mad easily anymore because he does not really pay much attention to his mom not being alive. The main character changes because he thinks before he starts to get angry when people talk about his mom and he is a little more comfortable around girls . Just because a person is not with you in life it does not mean you have to stop doing things in your life because of someone not being included in it .
In both of the story’s “The bass, the river, Sheila mant” and “Catch the moon” both boys have figured out what love is about and what it means. Both of the boys know what it is to be loved and how to be loved and how to be close to somebody in their life. The main ideas were that the boys had a date or experienced what it feels like to try to find someone perfect for them and they also had something in their life that meant almost the world to them. Overall in life there is going to be a down fall in life, but who is to say that you can’t get over that down fall. You only have one life, make it like you want it and don't give up on your strengths.
Period 5 11-22-10
Final Draft
The bass, the River, and Sheila Mant” and “Catch the Moon”
In the story” The Bass, the River, and Sheila Mant” the main character is the narrator. The main conflict in this story is when the Narrator takes Sheila Grant out in a boat and she tells the narrator she hates fishing. Unfortunately he is happy to go fishing and decides to stop what he loves for her.They end up at a concert and she leaves for some guy named Eric Caswell. Later on in his life he remembers to not make that same mistake again. The story’s theme is don’t stop what you love for a person. The main character in the story The Bass, the River, and Sheila Mant is the boy that likes to go fishing and catch bass in the river. The conflict in the story is that the boy falls in love with Sheila Mant and the boy loves to go fishing. Sheila Mant does not like fishing and so the boy throws his fish away that he caught. The resolution is that the boy learned from his mistake. The boy changes because after the fact Sheila Mant does not find him interesting because of his fishing he moves on and still does the same thing in life that he used to do. Whether or not there is something that you like or that you find impressing you don't have to change for that specific thing or that person just be yourself so you have confidence about yourself. The main character for the story “Catch the moon” is Luis and he is a teenage boy. The main conflict in the story is that Luis’s mother dies of cancer and Luis has a big struggle with that even though it has been three years since his mom has passed away. He does not know a lot about how to love or even like a girl because basically the only girl in his life that ever loved him was his mom. The resolution in the story is that Luis still loves his mom but he does not think about her that much and doesn't get mad easily anymore because he does not really pay much attention to his mom not being alive. The main character changes because he thinks before he starts to get angry when people talk about his mom and he is a little more comfortable around girls . Just because a person is not with you in life it does not mean you have to stop doing things in your life because of someone not being included in it .
In both of the story’s “The bass, the river, Sheila mant” and “Catch the moon” both boys have figured out what love is about and what it means. Both of the boys know what it is to be loved and how to be loved and how to be close to somebody in their life. The main ideas were that the boys had a date or experienced what it feels like to try to find someone perfect for them and they also had something in their life that meant almost the world to them. Overall in life there is going to be a down fall in life, but who is to say that you can’t get over that down fall. You only have one life, make it like you want it and don't give up on your strengths.
Tuesday, November 16, 2010
“Catch the Moon” Grief Paragraph
In real life luis is what we like to call "thugs." He has no grief, he is a hoodlum and should go back to juveinile hall. I think because he is selfish. I say he selfish because he cares about what happen to his mom. He didn't feel bad when he broke into that old ladies home. To me rthat is just awful. What if that ladie woke up and saw him and had a heart attack. Maybe he had a little grief, but a little is nothing.
Monday, November 15, 2010
SPA Movie & Games Day Paragraph
Last Friday I did absolutely nothing, but I heard that everyone watched a movie and played sports. Later on I went home to my favorite staff. She was going to work at a different house at three and told her that I would go with her. I spent the next six hours there. Finally I went home and fell fast asleep. Then I woke up in the middle of the night because I had a bad dream. I dreamt that I was getting chased by the grim reaper accept that he had a gun instead of a scythe. Then he finally grabbed me and started killing me.
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